Post by Sir Brick on Aug 11, 2014 12:12:09 GMT -8
Hello,this is my first post in this forum.
First of all, I want to apologize my bad language in the story, I'm German and still trying to master English ^^
I want to show you the first picture of the Prologue for my Character called Veit, a Lenfald.
Well, he is at the moment not a legal Lenfald, because The Prolouge or his backstory takes 4 buildings to tell and just then I will be able to name him and his story.
So I will make the Sign Up Challenge when those buildings are done, I hope he can be an illegal Lenfald for the next week or so until I'm finnished with the other buildings.
For now, I just want to present you my first building in LoR and the story.
For detail pictures, go to my flickr: www.flickr.com/photos/sir_brick/14885360831/
Story:
I hope you liked it or can give me feedback and that I can stay this bit illegal for the next few days.
~ Sir Brick
First of all, I want to apologize my bad language in the story, I'm German and still trying to master English ^^
I want to show you the first picture of the Prologue for my Character called Veit, a Lenfald.
Well, he is at the moment not a legal Lenfald, because The Prolouge or his backstory takes 4 buildings to tell and just then I will be able to name him and his story.
So I will make the Sign Up Challenge when those buildings are done, I hope he can be an illegal Lenfald for the next week or so until I'm finnished with the other buildings.
For now, I just want to present you my first building in LoR and the story.
For detail pictures, go to my flickr: www.flickr.com/photos/sir_brick/14885360831/
Story:
Lenfald, somewhere near the border to Loreo
A group of Farmers were working in the sun when suddenly a fanfarre shattered the silence. A group of 5 people walked up the small hill on the way. Then the man in the red noble clothing followed by four soldiers stopped. The fanfare tooted again, if someone did not hear it the first time.
"The Soverein of this land wants to speak to the leader of this farm" on of the soldiers shouted.
The father of the two other farmers walked down the stoned path and looked to the noble man, fear in his face.
"I came to get the tribut I demanded to protect this land. Sadly you did not bring the tribut, so we had to get here. That makes the double amount for our effort."
"What? No, we did not even had the old amount!" he answered and ran into the house. A few minutes later he came back with a small casket.
"That is everything we have. I'm really sorry." he said while giving the noble man the casket. After a small inspection he said: "Well, this is not event the half of the old tribut. Burn that farm down."
"WAIT, I almost forgot our last ehm treasure in the forests, a tribut to the forest."he shouted "Veit, go and grab your sister and get the treasure."
"Ha, no, she will not go, she seems pretty beautiful. Veit, your son, will go with one of my soldiers!"
After a short minute and silence, the hooded man next to Veit began to speak: "I will go with him, I am a friend of the family and gave my tribut" Then, after passing the father, both nodded sadly to each other, as a last goodbye. The father still looked in the direction they walked, with a tear rolling down his face. Then he turns around and looked at te noble man, with an angry face and said: "Here is your tribut!" taking his knife and stabbing in the noble man direction. He wounded his eye, a bad wound , then the soldiers took him. "That was silly, little man! Burn everything down and get the girl with the horses down here! I will take them with me! And you" turning to the father, blood in his face " will be happy when the day you will die has come."
Deep in the forest
The three man were walking deeper and deeper in the forest until the friend of the family stopped and cut with one movement the head of the soldiers with his sword of.
"Wha, dude, what??" Veit shouted while jumping away from the body of the soldier. "Coblin, what have you done? Now they will burn our farm!"
"They would have done that anyhow. This treasure does not exist, it was the last gift of your father for you, so you can flee.
Now we have to honour this and run!"
"Wait, do you mean my sister and father are both dead?" Veit asked in a quiet voice.
"I don't think so. As I know your father, he would have tried to kill the evil person, so the man will torture him in the bades ways. But your sister... Have you seen his looks to her? I think he will take her as a slave."
"Then we have to rescue and free them!"
"If that is what you want, you will have to wait and train to be able do defeat him. Both, your father and you sister, are strong people and will live until you are ready."
A group of Farmers were working in the sun when suddenly a fanfarre shattered the silence. A group of 5 people walked up the small hill on the way. Then the man in the red noble clothing followed by four soldiers stopped. The fanfare tooted again, if someone did not hear it the first time.
"The Soverein of this land wants to speak to the leader of this farm" on of the soldiers shouted.
The father of the two other farmers walked down the stoned path and looked to the noble man, fear in his face.
"I came to get the tribut I demanded to protect this land. Sadly you did not bring the tribut, so we had to get here. That makes the double amount for our effort."
"What? No, we did not even had the old amount!" he answered and ran into the house. A few minutes later he came back with a small casket.
"That is everything we have. I'm really sorry." he said while giving the noble man the casket. After a small inspection he said: "Well, this is not event the half of the old tribut. Burn that farm down."
"WAIT, I almost forgot our last ehm treasure in the forests, a tribut to the forest."he shouted "Veit, go and grab your sister and get the treasure."
"Ha, no, she will not go, she seems pretty beautiful. Veit, your son, will go with one of my soldiers!"
After a short minute and silence, the hooded man next to Veit began to speak: "I will go with him, I am a friend of the family and gave my tribut" Then, after passing the father, both nodded sadly to each other, as a last goodbye. The father still looked in the direction they walked, with a tear rolling down his face. Then he turns around and looked at te noble man, with an angry face and said: "Here is your tribut!" taking his knife and stabbing in the noble man direction. He wounded his eye, a bad wound , then the soldiers took him. "That was silly, little man! Burn everything down and get the girl with the horses down here! I will take them with me! And you" turning to the father, blood in his face " will be happy when the day you will die has come."
Deep in the forest
The three man were walking deeper and deeper in the forest until the friend of the family stopped and cut with one movement the head of the soldiers with his sword of.
"Wha, dude, what??" Veit shouted while jumping away from the body of the soldier. "Coblin, what have you done? Now they will burn our farm!"
"They would have done that anyhow. This treasure does not exist, it was the last gift of your father for you, so you can flee.
Now we have to honour this and run!"
"Wait, do you mean my sister and father are both dead?" Veit asked in a quiet voice.
"I don't think so. As I know your father, he would have tried to kill the evil person, so the man will torture him in the bades ways. But your sister... Have you seen his looks to her? I think he will take her as a slave."
"Then we have to rescue and free them!"
"If that is what you want, you will have to wait and train to be able do defeat him. Both, your father and you sister, are strong people and will live until you are ready."
I hope you liked it or can give me feedback and that I can stay this bit illegal for the next few days.
~ Sir Brick
