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Post by BrickMadness on May 16, 2014 5:40:26 GMT -8
Hello everyone this is my entry to the LC13 over at Lenfald! Dante rode slowly along the main road. It was midday, he was not far from StoneWald. He cam upon an old abandon cabin. He decided to take a small break there. He allowed his horse to graze freely.Taking a step in the grass, he realized that there were scorch marks on the ground. Dante bent down to examine them, he stood up and, moved towards the cabin. He soon discovered that the small structure had been brutally burned down. Dante could almost hear the crackling flames as he entered the house. He bent down and, examined everything. There was a man his wife and, perhaps a child had lived here once. Suddenly He felt the overwhelming urge to leave. He left the cabin and called his horse to him. he grabbed his horse's reins once the horse got close then he climbe atop the horse and gave its side's a slight kick with his feet. Then he stopped suddenly, over on the side of the road there was a sight that disturbed him more than anything he had ever seen before. He dismounted again and, slowly walked over to the corpse of what appeared to be three people. The two larger obviously the man and, his wife, the small one, the child. Dante knelt beside them and, wept for several minutes. Then he arose and, buried them. When he left, he now understood the true meaning of the horrors of war.
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GyustSil
Lenfald
Overseeing works at Oakenfort, for the Great Lenfald!
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Post by GyustSil on May 16, 2014 17:32:27 GMT -8
Nice build, especially the destroyed cabin. I would only add some black to it looks like a burned house, as described in the text
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SpearralSquid
Garheim
Green is not a creative color.
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Post by SpearralSquid on May 17, 2014 0:07:17 GMT -8
I agree with Gyustsil, it might be slightly improved by adding some black to the house to represent charred wood,but other than that it looks great! I like the texturing in the house walls.
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Post by BrickMadness on May 19, 2014 6:38:37 GMT -8
Nice build, especially the destroyed cabin. I would only add some black to it looks like a burned house, as described in the text Thank you. Yes looking back now I wish I had done that.
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Post by BrickMadness on May 19, 2014 6:39:11 GMT -8
I agree with Gyustsil, it might be slightly improved by adding some black to the house to represent charred wood,but other than that it looks great! I like the texturing in the house walls. Thanks so much man!
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