ludzik
Lenfald
Lenfald Freeman
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Post by ludzik on Nov 16, 2015 11:05:17 GMT -8
There were good days and there were bad days. Rebuilding the keep, keeping the area safe from the bandits, the threat from the neighbouring lands have caused sir Kejtar a lot of grief. On the days where the stress was becoming almost unbearable, sir Kejtar sneaks out quietly early in the morning to look upon the beauty of Kaszebe Falls. The falls are located in a very rocky and remote area and are considered by the few that know of them as a place of meditation and reflection.  |
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Post by SEdmison on Nov 24, 2015 16:42:35 GMT -8
Hey Ludzik, nice little build, with a simple but concise story justification.
If I were going to give any slight critiques, I would wonder whether you could incorporate a little bit of clear tile or some clear cheese wedges into the water to add to the sense of movement. Oxygenated water tends to be frothier or sudsier, and tends to look more clear or white. So imagine if at the tops of some of the columns of 1x1 round plates you had the occasional clear cheese wedge indicating that the water in one column is hitting an obstacle, diverting around it (and getting churned in the process), and then falling down the next column. Similarly you could have the occasional ripple in the pool itself, possibly a frog, snake, or fish reacting to the arrival of Sir Kejtar and his horse.
Keep building!
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ludzik
Lenfald
Lenfald Freeman
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Post by ludzik on Nov 24, 2015 17:39:02 GMT -8
Thanks! all good points. I thought of the clear white pieces after I posted my pictures and saw another build  But hey - it's all in the timing  There are "ripples" in the water but the blue on blue and the lighting does not show it unfortunately. Oh yeah, there is a frog there someplace though it's mostly hanging out off to the side  |
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But hey - it's all in the timing 
There are "ripples" in the water but the blue on blue and the lighting does not show it unfortunately. Oh yeah, there is a frog there someplace 