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Post by Sir Valiant~ on May 17, 2014 13:41:50 GMT -8
Hey guys! This is my latest build for the LoR. Hope you enjoy it and please read the complete backstory on Flickr! 
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StephenB
Page
Protecting the Forests of Lenfald
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Post by StephenB on May 17, 2014 14:22:55 GMT -8
Wow! Lovely architecture and texture! The landscaping is also quite nice! I think that the round tiles look kind of odd, though, and the trans light blue tiles would work better if they were actually connected. Overall, though, it looks fantastic!
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Post by Erathor Pridenar on May 18, 2014 7:52:16 GMT -8
I really like the round tiles! Good work!
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SpearralSquid
Garheim
Green is not a creative color.
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Post by SpearralSquid on May 18, 2014 10:24:58 GMT -8
I'm a big fan of the round tile greebling on the gate, and I like you use of plates+cheese on the arch.
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josdu
Outlaws
Marooned on the Island of Lost Souls
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Post by josdu on May 20, 2014 9:22:25 GMT -8
Nice build but I think the bridge could be worked on a little.
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Post by Sir Valiant~ on May 20, 2014 9:31:34 GMT -8
Thanks a bunch guys! I appreciate the feedback.
Sir Valiant~ |
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AK_Brickster
Innkeeper
Scouting the Lenfel Border
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Post by AK_Brickster on May 20, 2014 11:43:12 GMT -8
I actually think that the bridge turned out pretty nicely. The biggest thing to improve on would be the back face of the wall. It is totally blank and could use a little detailing.
I think you did a nice job building a lively scene on the inside of the walls.
Great job!
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Post by SEdmison on May 20, 2014 13:24:09 GMT -8
Lots of great stuff going on here. In particular, I'm loving the way you did the stone effect on the arch.
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Schmidt
Adventurer
Lord of the Bargain
All for one, one for all, every man for himself!
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Post by Schmidt on May 21, 2014 11:05:18 GMT -8
I love this, great work! You've got a lot of depth to the walls (something that I have struggled with) and your bridge is great. Simple little stream as well. The build is nice and not too busy, which seems to be something easy to do in a castle.
Awesome stuff.
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Post by Sir Valiant~ on May 21, 2014 12:55:24 GMT -8
Schmidt SEdmison @ak_Brickster - Thanks a bunch for the comments guys. It means a lot coming from people who are older than me and much more experienced in the brick than I am. Much appreciated! Sir Valiant~
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Post by Sir Caedric Moore on May 27, 2014 23:08:40 GMT -8
This is a nice build! I especially like the scene on the far side of the wall with the bustling village, although I agree that the sudden lack of wall texture looks out of place. I think a drawbridge and a portcullis would look great instead of the bridge but I already love the gate as it is. Great job!
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LoR - Myles of Lenfald --------- 
