josdu
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Post by josdu on Dec 21, 2016 3:32:59 GMT -8
Thanks! Here's my GC entry I had already finished by the deadline but hadn't uploaded in time:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Castle Second Prong, built on an always bloody beach near the castle fortress of port Prong, is a huge castle fit and meant to act as an outpost for that port. With a double gateway and immense sculptures reared up upon it, it is an imposing figure for any ships heading to to Prong as a safe harbor... safe for pirates that is. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hope you like it. Gives me four more points (I think). Edit: +4 points, Ayrlego 2 Jan
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Post by thunderfist on Dec 22, 2016 8:44:33 GMT -8
Free build for my character! Nerock, Angor and Cyren walked across a meadow covered in bushes and shrubs. So far the area had been heavily guarded so they were going carefully though a valley in the mountains of Garheim. They were about to climb up onto a road when Nerock heard a horse coming. "Get down and hide in the bushes!" he yelled and just as they jumped off the road and hid, a mounted guard rode passed on a horse. "Nerock any one of us could have taken him. Why hide?" Cyren Asked "Because I would like to go unnoticed for as long as we can. He is gone now, Onward!" Nerock said as he rose. Edit: +2 personal points, Ayrlego 2 Jan
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Post by Karhn on Dec 30, 2016 21:13:36 GMT -8
So, I'm reworking Kahrn's backstory and writing a story out of it to better help me get an idea of what I want to do with him, so wanted to know that you guys think... Snow. There was snow falling, and light too. It wasn't normal candle light. It was brighter and stronger. It gave off a warmer aroma. It ate everything it touched, slowly, turning everything black before it crumbles into grey dust. The moon was up as well, along with the stars. Screams. People were screaming and yelling, there was the sound of galloping and clanging metal. Red liquid too. It was everywhere, collecting in pools or flowing like rivers. Streaking across the floors, freezing in the snow, or splatting against walls and people. Then there was a louder scream. "Mother?" She fell to one knee, an arrow protruding from her back. Tears streaming from her eyes, the red liquid spilling from her mouth. Pulling, then pushing, and screaming. "Run!" She yelled. "Go! Get out of here. Your father will meet at the pass." Tears ran down her face as she collapsed. She didn't wake up. Then they came. Men with horns coming from the crowns of their heads. They charged, the crunching of snow grew louder as they came closer. A flash, lighting erupted, it coursed over the raiders, shocking them. Loud screaming came from them. Then silence, cinders and charred armor was all that was left. Then darkness took over... ***This is the little prologue, by the way
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josdu
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Marooned on the Island of Lost Souls
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Post by josdu on Dec 31, 2016 3:38:23 GMT -8
Nice, but gory (after all, your an outlaw ). Also, is 'she' the mother or daughter? Should make that clear IMO.
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Post by Karhn on Dec 31, 2016 3:47:40 GMT -8
Yes, 'she' is referring to his mother. The point of it being gory is to symbolize how traumatizing it was, as Kahrn was only a young boy when it happened, and the lack of detail is to show how fast the event happened.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2017 4:10:23 GMT -8
Return of Dafyd ap Owen (forestfriend) . Greetings fellow outlaws . I'm returning after long absence. Have accumulated handy amount of bricks and about 55 mixed Outlaw Outlaw Legoi . Intend building new MOCS for Outlaws (and own profit naturally !) Ciao . Dafyd .
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Post by Sir Caelan Munro on Jan 7, 2017 6:58:57 GMT -8
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Post by Ayrlego on Jan 15, 2017 21:45:14 GMT -8
Hi Outlaws, have you guys decided on your bignette finalist for the GC? Can you please let me know so we can set up the final voting threads. Thanks!
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josdu
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Post by josdu on Jan 16, 2017 2:07:44 GMT -8
Hi Outlaws, have you guys decided on your bignette finalist for the GC? Can you please let me know so we can set up the final voting threads. Thanks! No, we haven't even started.. perhaps I'll take the initiative and start a poll thread shortly. Is it just the bignette we need to vote on?
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Post by Ayrlego on Jan 16, 2017 3:19:46 GMT -8
That would be great thanks josdu, yeah only bignette as there were no Outlaw restricted entries.
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josdu
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Post by josdu on Jan 16, 2017 7:46:36 GMT -8
VOTE NOW for the finalist bignatte, guys! I made it a somewhat short poll to not keep the other factions waiting.
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Post by Sir Caelan Munro on Jan 17, 2017 15:25:29 GMT -8
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Post by Ayrlego on Jan 22, 2017 11:08:30 GMT -8
Outlaws, can somebody please let me know the results of your poll for the GC bignette finalist? I'll set up the global polls as soon as I have your results. Thanks!
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josdu
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Post by josdu on Jan 23, 2017 5:08:47 GMT -8
We have a tie.. maybe you'd be willing to break it for us? We only had two votes total, in fact :/ .
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Post by Ayrlego on Jan 23, 2017 10:18:00 GMT -8
We have a tie.. maybe you'd be willing to break it for us? We only had two votes total, in fact :/ . Sure, PM me the two entries and we'll work something out. Thanks!
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